Do you think men and women show their anger differently?
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Happy Tuesday, [이름]! I agree with you, men and women are different in many ways. Each and everyone of us are unique, I think that\'s what makes all of us special. You did great here! See you! ~Teacher Elisha
In my point of view, women and men express their anger differently.
>> CORRECT!
Since there are so many differences between men and women not only physically but also biologically such as the structure of a brain or hormones which has a big influence on people.
>> There are so many differences between men and women, not only physically but also biologically such as the structure of the brain and hormones which have a big influence on people.
It doesn\'t mean men don\'t think but they more likely to get involved in a fight or act before think in a violent way.
>> It doesn\'t mean that men don\'t think, it\'s just that they are more likely to get involved in a fight or that they are more likely to act in a violent way before thinking.
On the other hand, in cases of women, they less face the situation than men might do.
>> On the other hand, in cases of women, they face less situations than men usually do.
In conclusion, women and men show their anger differently.
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