Do you think men and women show their anger differently?
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear teacher Sheila
Happy New Year!
Kia Ora! (BE healthy!) Teacher Sheila~
Homework: Do you think men and women show their anger differently?
I think everybody not differently. Everyone feels joy, anger, sorrow, and pleasure.
If another cases, may be alien.
강사 첨삭
Hello Tony! Happy New Year! Let\'s welcome this new year with a warm heart. I hope you to have good health and long life Tony! :)
~Teacher Sheila ^_^
>>CORRECT
OR>>I think everybody shows anger.
Everyone feels joy, anger, sorrow, and pleasure.
>>CORRECT
>>CORRECT
If another cases, may be alien.
>>If there is another case, they maybe aliens.
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