Do you think men enjoy sports more than women?
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree this premis.
Almost every sports is required physical ability to win.
Men usually is more powerful than women.
Therefore, I believe most sports is male-friendly and men enjoy sports more than women. because it\'s a essence of sports.
강사 첨삭
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~~Teacher Ryka^^
I agree this premis.
>> I agree with this premise.
Almost every sports is required physical ability to win.
>> Almost every sport requires physical ability to win.
Men usually is more powerful than women.
>>Men are usually more powerful than women.
Therefore, I believe most sports is male-friendly and men enjoy sports more than women. because it\'s a essence of sports.
>>Therefore, I believe most sports are male-friendly, and men enjoy sports more than women because it\'s the essence of sports.
>> I agree with this premise.
Almost every sports is required physical ability to win.
>> Almost every sport requires physical ability to win.
Men usually is more powerful than women.
>>Men are usually more powerful than women.
Therefore, I believe most sports is male-friendly and men enjoy sports more than women. because it\'s a essence of sports.
>>Therefore, I believe most sports are male-friendly, and men enjoy sports more than women because it\'s the essence of sports.
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