Do you think middle children are unhappy? Why?
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I think that middle children are very unhappy. Because they lose their everything from other siblings. Also, even their parents give less love than other siblings. So I think that middle children are very unhappy.
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I think that middle children are very unhappy. Because they lose their everything from other siblings.
>> I think that middle children are very unhappy because they lose their everything to other siblings.
Also, even their parents give less love than other siblings.
>> Also, even their parents give lesser love to them than to other siblings.
So I think that middle children are very unhappy.
>> Therefore, I believe that middle children are very unhappy.
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