Do you think minors should be punished for breaking the law? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Minors in Korea aren\'t punished same as a adult.
There are some issues because, some minors misuse it.
They assault others. but punishment is not same.
Many people want to revise law for minors.
강사 첨삭
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Minors in Korea aren\'t punished same as a adult.
>> Minors in Korea are not punished the same as adults.
There are some issues because, some minors misuse it.
>> There are some issues because some minors misuse this.
They assault others. but punishment is not same.
>> They assault others, but the punishment is not the same.
Many people want to revise law for minors.
>> Many people want to revise the law for minors.
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