Do you think modern technology reduces or increases stress? Why?
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I think modern technology reduces stress.
Because of the technological development, we have become more comfortable than before.
There are also more and more things that we don\'t have to do.
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I think modern technology reduces stress.
>> CORRECT!
Because of the technological development, we have become more comfortable than before.
>> Because of technological development, we have become more comfortable than before.
There are also more and more things that we don\'t have to do.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> There are also more and more things that we don\'t have to do physically anymore.
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