Do you think money can make people happy?
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I think money can make people happy because if youhave it, you can do what you want.
But, many money can gambling.
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Do you think money can make people happy?
I think money can make people happy because if you have it, you can do what you want.
>> I think money can make people happy because you can do what you want if you have it.
But, many money can gambling.
>> But some people have a habit of gambling if they have a lot of money.
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