Do you think most music (say 90%) is rubbish?

2024-01-03 · 첨삭 강사 Camille

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Definitely yes, and it\'s more than 90%. It\'s because of there are very few songs which can be famous. Although it could be hit, it\'s a very rare case. Let see my country case, many [이름]gers do debut per year and disappear. That\'s why I said it, all of the songs are good well.

강사 첨삭

Good day, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille


Definitely yes, and it\'s more than 90%. 
>> CORRECT!
It\'s because of there are very few songs which can be famous. 
>> CORRECT!
Although it could be hit, it\'s a very rare case.
>> CORRECT!
Let see my country case, many [이름]gers do debut per year and disappear. 
>> CORRECT!
That\'s why I said it, all of the songs are good well.
>> That\'s why I said it, all of the songs are good and can be written well.

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