Do you think napping is important?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, because i think napping rise to quality of life. Animals and babies are important to napping. In the same manner, it is important us.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]! Absolutely! Your perspective on the importance of napping is insightful. Just like animals and babies, we also benefit greatly from quality rest. Keep exploring and sharing your thoughts!
Yes, because i think napping rise to quality of life.
>>Yes, because I think napping increases the quality of life.
OR
>>Yes, because I think napping contributes to the quality of life.
Animals and babies are important to napping.
>>Napping is important for animals and babies.
In the same manner, it is important us.
>>In the same manner, it is important for us.
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