Do you think newspapers will disappear in the future? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, newspapers are going to disappear someday in the future.
Nowadays, a lot of people are more familiar with the Internet.
Because of this reason, a lot of people are looking for some news in the Internet.
So, I think someday, newspapers will be disappear and a lot of people will search for some news in the Internet.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I also believe we won\'t need newspapers anymore in the future as they require paper that we get from trees. Anyway, you did a great job. See you tomorrow! ^^
~~Teacher Kate
>>CORRECT!
Nowadays, a lot of people are more familiar with the Internet.
Nowadays, a lot of people are more familiar with the Internet.
>>CORRECT!
Because of this reason, a lot of people are looking for some news in the Internet.
Because of this reason, a lot of people are looking for some news in the Internet.
>>Because of this reason, a lot of people are looking for some news on the Internet.
So, I think someday, newspapers will be disappear and a lot of people will search for some news in the Internet.
So, I think someday, newspapers will be disappear and a lot of people will search for some news in the Internet.
>>So, I think someday, newspapers will disappear and a lot of people will search for some news on the Internet.
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