Do you think North Korea and South Korea will unite soon? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
In my opinion, no.
For almost 70 years, Korea have been divided into South and North.
But there was no any signs to unite soon.
And I think if there isn\'t any big thing, then they will not unite.
Because of these reasons, I think North and South Korea won\'t unite soon.
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For almost 70 years, Korea have been divided into South and North.
And I think if there isn\'t any big thing, then they will not unite.
Because of these reasons, I think North and South Korea won\'t unite soon.
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In my opinion, no.
>> CORRECT
For almost 70 years, Korea have been divided into South and North.
>> For almost 70 years, Korea has been divided into South and North.
But there was no any signs to unite soon.
>> But there were no signs that they will unite soon.
And I think if there isn\'t any big thing, then they will not unite.
>> CORRECT
Because of these reasons, I think North and South Korea won\'t unite soon.
>> CORRECT
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