Do you think office uniform is important? Why?

2014-09-11 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Ofice uniform is so convenience in many reason. First, we don't need to rethink what kind of cloth are appropriate for our office. When i go to our office, i consider that this cloth may be proper to out office. It is so bothersome and annoying to me. And i can save money to buy office cloth. Second, office cloth give office team team spirit. Through same cloth we make team cooperation. If we go out of office, we can recognize each other and we would get sense of kinship. Anyway, i prefer office uniform because of it's convenience.

강사 첨삭

Hi there^^ Thank you for doing your homework^^ I agree with you! It\'s very convenient because we don\'t need to think what to wear every day. Anyway, I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all yout points. See you later^^ ~T.Chelsea Ofice uniform is so convenience in many reason. >> Office uniform is so convenient in many reasons.First, we don\'t need to rethink what kind of cloth are appropriate for our office. >> First, we don\'t need to re-think on what kinds of clothes are appropriate in our office. When i go to our office, i consider that this cloth may be proper to out office. >> When I go to our office, I always consider if it is appropriate in the office.It is so bothersome and annoying to me. >> It is so bothersome and annoying for me. And i can save money to buy office cloth. >> And I can save money to buy office uniform.Second, office cloth give office team team spirit. >> Second, office uniform gives the team a spirit. Through same cloth we make team cooperation. >> Through the same clothes, we can make the team cooperate. If we go out of office, we can recognize each other and we would get sense of kinship. >> If we go out from the office, we can recognize each other ans we would get a sense of kinship. Anyway, i prefer office uniform because of it\'s convenience. >> Anyway, I prefer office uniform because it\'s convenient.

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