Do you think one type of natural disaster is worse than another? Explain your answer fully.
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I think that tsunami is worse than blackout. Because blackout do not give harm damage so much.But tsunami can mash up many house by water waves. Sometimes its so gigantic that I say it giant tsunami. 🌊
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I think that tsunami is worse than blackout.
>>> I think that tsunami is worse than a blackout.
Because blackout do not give harm damage so much.
>>> Because a blackout doesn\'t give harm or damaged so much.
But tsunami can mash up many house by water waves.
>>> But tsunami can mash up many houses by water waves.
Sometimes its so gigantic that I say it giant tsunami.
>>> Sometimes it\'s so gigantic that I say it\'s a giant tsunami.
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