Do you think online gambling is dangerous?
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In my opinion, it\'s a half and half. It\'s because you can\'t control the payment for gaming money, it would be dangerous. However, you can do it that wouldn\'t be dangerous. Most likely, the online gambling tend to give you some money [이름]ce they suggest you to start to the gambling. After running out of the money whether some people can quit the gambling or not. So, I personally think it\'s a 50%. :)
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Hi, Eric!
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
In my opinion, it\'s half and half.
>> CORRECT!It\'s because you can\'t control the payment for gaming money, it would be dangerous.
>> It\'s because if you can\'t control the payment for gaming money, it would be dangerous.
However, you can do it that wouldn\'t be dangerous.
>> However, if you can do it, that wouldn\'t be dangerous.
Most likely, the online gambling tend to give you some money [이름]ce they suggest you to start to the gambling.
>> Most likely, online gambling tends to give you some money [이름]ce they suggest you to start gambling.
After running out of the money whether some people can quit the gambling or not.
After running out of the money whether some people can quit the gambling or not.
>> After running out of the money, some people can quit gambling or not.
So, I personally think it\'s 50%. :)
>> CORRECT!
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