Do you think oriental medication is more effective than modern medicine?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think oriental medication is more effective than modern medicine depending on situation.
Of cause, if we are sick, we must go to hospital.
Sometimes, it says that \" Mom\'s hand is medicine\" .
When my tummy ached that I was child, my mom patted my tummy in her hand. Then I was strangely cured.
if you have injury, you have to use the \"doenjang(it makes beans)\" .
This is the traditional style in Korea old ages. But, in the case , injury is getting worse than before.
Medicine is getting better and better in modern. We have to accrording to modern medicine.
But I know, ours mom\'s hand is the best medicine still.
강사 첨삭
Hello ms. [이름]. Thank you for this. I agree, mom\'s touch is filled with love and care as well.
- T. Beth
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I think oriental medication is more effective than modern medicine depending on situation.>>> I think oriental medication is more effective than modern medicine depending on the situation.
Of cause, if we are sick, we must go to hospital.
>>> Of course, if we are sick, we must go to the hospital.
Sometimes, it says that \" Mom\'s hand is medicine\" .
>>> OR: There is a saying which goes like this, \" Mom\'s hand is medicine\" .
When my tummy ached that I was child, my mom patted my tummy in her hand.
>>> When my tummy ached when I was a child, my mom patted my tummy with her hand.
Then I was strangely cured.
>>> correct
if you have injury, you have to use the \"doenjang(it makes beans)\" .
if you have injury, you have to use the \"doenjang(it makes beans)\" .
>>> OR: If you are injured, you have to use the \"doenjang(it makes beans)\" .
This is the traditional style in Korea old ages.
>>> correct
But, in the case , injury is getting worse than before.
>>> But, in that case, the injury gets worse than before.
Medicine is getting better and better in modern.
>>> Medicine is getting better and better in the modern society.
We have to accrording to modern medicine.
>>> We have to do what is required according to modern medicine.
But I know, ours mom\'s hand is the best medicine still.
>>> correct
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