Do you think our lives have been improved by computer technology
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I think that our lives already improved by computer technology because we used it related to computer technolgy such as get to useful imformation from internet, booking for a ticket like public transportation, AI and so on.
>> I think that our lives are already improved because of the computer technology and we also get useful information from the internet, we can book tickets, AI and so on.
As you already know, the computer technolgy spread widely in our lives.
>> As you already know, the computer technology spread widely in our lives.
In my opinion, it is already enough to live in our life.
>> In my opinion, it is already enough to live our life.
Anyway, the AI is hot issue these days.
>> Anyway, the AI is a hot issue these days.
A couple of years ago, It was held a Baduk big match between AI and Korean Baduk champion in Korea.
>> A couple of years ago, Baduk big match between AI and a Korean Baduk champion was held in Korea.
Do yoy guess that who won in the big match? 3 and 1 AI won.
>> Can you guess who won the big match? 3 points for AI and 1 for the Korean Baduk champion. The AI won!
Everybody were shocking that match result because every Baduk specialist were expecting the Baduk champion won that match.
>> Everybody were shocked at the results match because every Baduk specialists were expecting the Baduk champion to win the match.
Also, I was expected that he victory AI.
>> I also expected that he\'ll won against AI.
The reason why I am really afraid of AI because human dominated by AI in the near future.
>> The reason why I am really afraid of AI is because humans will be dominated by AI in the near future.
I really don\'t want to live under control by AI in the world.
>> I really don\'t want to live under AI control here in the world.
It just thinking is terrible.
>> It\'s a terrible idea.
Overall, I want to live happy in the world where AI complements human shortage.
>> Overall, I want to live a happy life in the world where AI complements human shortage.
That\'s it. Thank you.
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