Do you think our money is safe in a bank? Why?

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Thank you for answering your writing task. Yes, we should also invest our money in other ways like buying gold jewelry and secure it in our own safe or better deposit it in a trusted bank. See you, ciao!^^

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In my case, it is hard to believe that money in a bank is totally safe.

>>> Correct!

There could be two supporting detalis for my suspiscion.
>>> There could be two supporting detalis for my suspicion.

First, some banks in histroy went bankrupt and have driven their customers to the death.

>>> First, some banks in histroy went bankrupt and have driven their customers to death.

We can easily recall the Lehman Brothers tragedy.

>>> Correct!

History repears itself.

>>> History repeats itself.

Basically, bankers follow profit and they recommand people to invest high-risk commodities.

>>> Basically, bankers follow profits and they recommand people to invest in high-risk commodities.  

The higher an interest rate is, the more interests borrowers should pay.

>>> The higher an interest rate is, the more interests the borrowers should pay.

There are a lot of people who ruin their life because of a debt. And also, just making a deposit could be dangerous.

>>> There are a lot of people who ruin their life because of debts, and also just making a deposit could be dangerous.

What if the bank of your account runs out of deposits doing their own buisiness and colse the door? 

>>> What if the bank runs out of deposits and shut their business?  

Second, money itself is not an safe property.

>>> Second, money itself is not a safe property.

We have the notion of exchange rate.

>>> Correct! 

The rate of exchange is largely affected from the international circumstance.

>>> The exchange rate is largely affected by international circumstances.

If the war happens, our bankbook will just be nothing more than paper.

>>> If the war happens, our bankbook will just be nothing but a piece of paper.

So, I always say my friends that we should buy golden bar or most stable currency, dolloar.

>>> So, I always tell my friends that we should buy golden bars or the most stable currency, dollar.