Do you think parents nowadays are different from parents in the past?
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Obviously yes, it\'s different a lot. Parents thought their children were workers because they were farming in the past. Nowadays, it\'s rare to farm. So parents don\'t think it\'s important to give a birth. Also, birth ratio in going down in South Korea.
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Hi Elic! :)
Obviously yes, it\'s different a lot.
>> Obviously yes, it has been a lot different.
Parents thought their children were workers because they were farming in the past.
>> Parents used to think that their children are workers because they were farming in the past.
Nowadays, it\'s rare to farm.
>> CORRECT
So parents don\'t think it\'s important to give a birth.
>> This is why most parents don\'t think that it is important to have children anymore.
Also, birth ratio in going down in South Korea.
>> Also, the birth rate in South Korea is very low now.
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