Do you think people are born with empathy or they learned or taught it?

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In my opinion, it is taught by experience.

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It is only a set of manners and rules that are nurtured.

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Parents will make sure that a kid will not do stupid things that will simply lead him nowhere.

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They teach a kid what is right, so that it can find its way to behave somewhere in at least the right direction.

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 Social experiences will form the mind of the kid.

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 After countless experiences, the kid will recognise patterns from which it can learn to make judgements of what happens in someone else\'s head. 

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 Of course, everyone might encounter the same amount of experiences, but still not every kid develops empathy with the same speed.

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This, just like school, depends on the effort that a kid is making to understand other people.

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Busy friendships, difficult situations... many things may cause a kid to invest more energy in social learning.

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 I would like to say that empathy is one of those few things that we cannot be born with.

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