Do you think people can move objects without touching them (telekinesis)? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I think so. It\'s because modern people made many robots and some convenient device. So If people use these things, they can move anything without any touching. And I think someday people can cook something without any touching. Because of my bad cooking skill, I\'m looking forward some scientists will make cooking robot.
강사 첨삭
Hello Cindy!
This is quite a nice idea. I am also not good at cooking and I want something to do it. We might not have telekinesis, but with this technology we can feel satisfied with the food cooked by a machine. ^^
~T. Maine
Yes, I think so.
>>Correct.
It\'s because modern people made many robots and some
convenient device.
>>It\'s because modern people made many robots and some convenient devices.
So If people use these things, they can move anything
without any touching.
>>So if people use these things, they can move anything without touching.
And I think someday people can cook something
without any touching.
>>And I think someday people can cook anything without touching.
Because of my bad cooking skill, I\'m looking
forward some scientists will make cooking robot.
>>Because of my bad cooking skill, I\'m looking forward to some scientists who will invent this cooking robot.
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