Do you think people can stay economically active even after retirement? How?
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I agree that working is necessary after retirement.
These day people live too long.
So we usually live twenty to thirty years more after retirement.
In Korea, many retired people work in the company as a security or cleaning worker.
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Hi there! I’m so pleased you completed the homework. You did an excellent job sharing your thoughts and ideas—keep up the great work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I agree that working is necessary after retirement.
>> CORRECT
>> I agree that it is important to work after retirement.
These day people live too long. So we usually live twenty to thirty years more after retirement.
>> These days, people live much longer, so we often live twenty to thirty years after retirement.
In Korea, many retired people work in the company as a security or cleaning worker.
>> In Korea, many retired people work in companies as security guards or cleaning staff.
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