Do you think people change after getting married?

2016-02-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Personally, I think people change after getting married, especially in terms of responsibility. The marriage can't be done by oneself. Marriage is a sacred union between two people, and their family. Therefore, a lot of changes accompanied when people got married. You are going to have a wedding ceremony in front of your friends and family, and live with your husband or wife. Marriage needed strong responsibility and sacrifice. So, when a person got married, he or she can endure difficulties than before, because got certain responsibility for family. Therefore, I think people become more responsible after they got married.

강사 첨삭

HI there, Kate!^^

I appreciate your insights about marriage and people\'s attitude after marriage. You are right, people become more responsible after marriage. On the other hand, there are some people who depend on their partner even if they are already married. They don\'t have a sense of responsibility. Anyway, please kindly check some of my corrections. Have a wonderful day and see you in class.

~Kelly^^

Personally, I think people change after getting married, especially in terms of responsibility.

>> Correct.
The marriage can\'t be done by oneself.

>> Marriage can\'t be done by one person only.

Marriage is a sacred union between two people, and their family.

>> Correct.

Therefore, a lot of changes accompanied when people got married.

>> Therefore, a lot of changes accompany people when they get married.

You are going to have a wedding ceremony in front of your friends and family, and live with your husband or wife.

>> Correct.

Marriage needed strong responsibility and sacrifice.

>> Marriage needs strong responsibility and sacrifice.

So, when a person got married, he or she can endure difficulties than before, because got certain responsibility for family.

>> So, when a person gets married, he or she should endure difficulties more than before, because of his or her responsibility for family.
Therefore, I think people become more responsible after they got married.

>> Correct. 

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