Do you think people don\'t read enough books these days?
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These days, I think people read enough books.
Because in the past, people had to go to the bookstore to read a book.
But now they can read a book whenever and anywhere they want using their cell phone or a computer.
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Jasmin
These days, I think people read enough books.
>>These days, I think people read enough books.
Because in the past, people had to go to the bookstore to read a book.
>>In the past, people need to go to the bookstores just to read or buy some books.
But now they can read a book whenever and anywhere they want using their cell phone or a computer.
>>But today, through their mobile phones and computers they can read eBooks anywhere and anytime they want.
Jasmin
These days, I think people read enough books.
>>These days, I think people read enough books.
Because in the past, people had to go to the bookstore to read a book.
>>In the past, people need to go to the bookstores just to read or buy some books.
But now they can read a book whenever and anywhere they want using their cell phone or a computer.
>>But today, through their mobile phones and computers they can read eBooks anywhere and anytime they want.
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