Do you think people focus too much on appearing to be successful?
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Yes, I think people focus too much on appearing to be successful.
When someone succeeds, people pay a lot of attention and envy him.
In other words, people focus it to receive attention and envy.
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Hello [이름]! :)
When someone succeeds, people pay a lot of attention and envy him.
In other words, people focus it to receive attention and envy.
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Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
Yes, I think people focus too much on appearing to be successful.
>> CORRECT!
When someone succeeds, people pay a lot of attention and envy him.
>> CORRECT!
In other words, people focus it to receive attention and envy.
>> In other words, people focus on it to receive attention and envy.
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