Do you think people focus too much on appearing to be successful?
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I think it differs from person to person because each person has a particular strategy to succeed. Some people use their attractive appearance or fancy car to win business deals-We Koreans tend to trust those with fancy cars. The other people develop their skills and professional knowledge to succeed. Whatever strategy you have, it\'s sure that good looks give people a good impression and favor.
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Do you think people focus too much on appearing to be successful?
I think it differs from person to person because each person has a particular strategy to succeed.
>> OR: I supposed this hinges on the person\'s approach to success.
Some people use their attractive appearance or fancy car to win business deals-We Koreans tend to trust those with fancy cars.
>> OR: Some people with an attractive appearance or fancy cars have a better chance of closing business deals - Koreans are more inclined to trust those who drive high-end cars.
The other people develop their skills and professional knowledge to succeed.
>> OR: Whereas others choose to work more on their skills and professional knowledge as a means to achieve success.
Whatever strategy you have, it\'s sure that good looks give people a good impression and favor.
>> OR: Whatever game plan you have, there\'s no question that good looks can give people a head start on anything they decide to take on in life.
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