Do you think people have become obsessed with technology?

I think that people are indulging in technology in modern soiety and I can see these people around. Firstly, there are some people who are called as 'an early adapter', since they are sensitive to the new gadgets and purshase them as soon as launched. It is natural for them to change a well-functioned cell phone to a newly launched one. In addition, because technology could be connected to making a more money and it could enhance convenience of our life, it is difficult to seperate technology and people today. After the industralization, the core of global trade is based on technology and related knowleedge. Therefore, many countires are making an effort to develop their technology and science. Also, people have been familiarzed with the use of techchology in daily lives such as robots, smart phones, and other machines, and pursue more convenience through them. In conclusion, technology is ingrain in our society not only in daily routine but in global trade among the countires.

Good morning [이름]!!! Thank you for answering the homework I gave you. I enjoyed reading your essay. Keep it up! Just go over my corrections please. Have a good day! ~KeLLy~ I think that people are indulging in technology in modern soiety and I can see these people around. >> I think that in this modern society, people are indulging in technology and I can see them everywhere. Firstly, there are some people who are called as \'an early adapter\', since they are sensitive to the new gadgets and purshase them as soon as launched. >> Firstly, there are some people who are called as \'an early adapter\', since they are sensitive to new gadgets and purchase them as soon as they are launched. It is natural for them to change a well-functioned cell phone to a newly launched one. >> Correct. In addition, because technology could be connected to making a more money and it could enhance convenience of our life, it is difficult to seperate technology and people today. >> In addition, because technology could be connected to making more money and enhancing the convenience of our lives, it is difficult to separate technology and people today. After the industralization, the core of global trade is based on technology and related knowleedge. >> After the period of industralization, the core of global trade is based on technology and related knowledge. Therefore, many countires are making an effort to develop their technology and science. >> Therefore, many countires are making an effort to develop science and technology. Also, people have been familiarzed with the use of techchology in daily lives such as robots, smart phones, and other machines, and pursue more convenience through them. >> Also, people have been familiar with the use of different products of techchology such as robots, smart phones, and other machines, and pursue more convenience through them. In conclusion, technology is ingrain in our society not only in daily routine but in global trade among the countires. >> In conclusion, technology is ingrain in our society; not only in our daily routines but as well as in global trade.