Do you think people help each other because it makes them feel good? How do you feel when someone he
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I think we have to help each other ,someone help me also help them too.
It makes us happy and a healty society .I am sure that people want to help someone
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ju Mi! I agree with you. It\'s true that a little kindness goes a long way. We should help others as much as we can. Enjoy your weekend! ^^
~T. Jewel
I think we have to help each other ,
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>> I think we must help one another.
someone help me also help them too.
>>If someone helps me, I will help them too.
It makes us happy and a healty society .
>>It makes us happy and creates a healthy society.
I am sure that people want to help someone
>>I am sure that people want to help others.
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