Do you think people learn better from experience or from books? Why?

2025-06-09 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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In general, curricula in most s[이름]ols stick to using textbooks to teach students since that method is simpler, more manageable and more cost-effective. However, I think people learn better from various experiences. According to the Korean Times, one of the most renowned educational newspapers in Korea, over 85.2% of teachers in a survey argued that their students have shown enhanced academic performance when participating in various experiences. Indeed, it is true that students learning through both field trips and textbooks show more advances. Practical applications of knowledge such as science experiments help children think more creatively and retain long-term memory skills. Not only s[이름]ol programs but also other activities such as family trips, sports and volunteer work play significant roles in their effective learning. I believe that experience can help anyone. People of all ages can acquire knowledge they are interested in more quickly and profoundly through experience.

강사 첨삭

Hi Isaac!
Welcome to a new week.
Hopefully, we can make a lot of progress in your preparations.
Let\'s both work hard.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
In general, curricula in most s[이름]ols stick to using textbooks to teach students since that method is simpler, more manageable and more cost-effective. 
>> Correct
However, I think people learn better from various experiences. 
>> Correct
According to the Korean Times, one of the most renowned educational newspapers in Korea, over 85.2% of teachers in a survey argued that their students have shown enhanced academic performance when participating in various experiences.
>> Correct
Indeed, it is true that students learning through both field trips and textbooks show more advances. 
>> Indeed, it is true that students who learn through both field trips and textbooks show more progress. 
Practical applications of knowledge such as science experiments help children think more creatively and retain long-term memory skills. 
>> Practical applications of knowledge such as science experiments help children think more creatively and improve long-term memory.
Not only s[이름]ol programs but also other activities such as family trips, sports and volunteer work play significant roles in their effective learning. 
>> Correct
I believe that experience can help anyone. 
>> Correct
People of all ages can acquire knowledge they are interested in more quickly and profoundly through experience.
>> Correct

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