Do you think people should be allowed to get divorced?

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There are different opinions on divorce.

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In the past, most people think that couples should not get divorced.

>> In the past, most people thought that couples should not get divorced.
However, this trend has changed that getting a divorce is not bad in the present.

>> However, this trend has changed in a way that getting a divorce is not bad in the present.
In this essay, I will talk about my opinion and reasons.

>> In this essay, I will talk about my opinion and give my own reasons.
I believe that people must make a decision about divorce carefully.

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There are several reasons why divorce is needed.

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First of all, there is no doubt that divorce negatively affects their children.

>> First of all, there is no doubt that divorce negatively affects the children.
 If couples get a divorce, their children doesn\'t probably keep living their normal life.

>> If couples get a divorce, their children won\'t probably lead normal lives.
In addition, it would engender social problems such as the child criminal.

>> In addition, it would engender social problems such as juvenile delinquency.
As a result, the number of juvenile crime would increase.

>> As a result, the number of juvenile crimes would increase.
Secondly, a few couples didn\'t know their personal problems when they got married.

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For example, several men has disorders when they are drunken.

>> For example, several men become violent or abusive when they get drunk.
According to researches, the number of people who get the family violence increase for a long time.

>> According to research, the number of people who are victims of domestic violence has been increasing over time.
For these reasons, these problems should be solved and divorce should be allowed.

>> Correct