Do you think people should be honest all the time? Why or why not?

2021-10-08 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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I think the more we try to be honest, the better. But we can\'t always follow honesty. We need situational wisdom and thinking about the benefits of being honest. When I am honest, my inner self can be healthy. I usually want to be honest, but sometimes I can\'t. The reason is that I don\'t want other people or situations to be uncomfortable because of me. However, in counseling, I learned that I should be more honest. The reason is for my inner health. It is not easy to process for me. But I think the difference between living with awareness and not being aware is huge. If we are honest at the right time with this awareness, we can have a good impact on people and the environment. Another thing is that just because I want to be honest doesn\'t make me honest. To be honest, you must first find a reason for courage and honesty. I want to have the wise honesty that God gives me. Thank you so much for praying for me. I\'m getting better now! See you soon!

강사 첨삭

I believe this is an honest answer, Jane! I am happy to know that you are feeling better!-Faith-
I think the more we try to be honest, the better. 
>> CORRECT
But we can\'t always follow honesty. 
>> CORRECT
OR As much as we want to, I think we can\'t always be honest.
We need situational wisdom and thinking about the benefits of being honest. 
>> We need situational wisdom and think about the benefits of being honest. 
When I am honest, my inner self can be healthy. 
>> CORRECT
I usually want to be honest, but sometimes I can\'t. 
>> CORRECT
The reason is that I don\'t want other people or situations to be uncomfortable because of me. 
>> CORRECT
OR It is because I don\'t like to inconvenience others and circumstances.
However, in counseling, I learned that I should be more honest. The reason is for my inner health.
>> However, in counseling, I learned that I should be more honest for my inner health.
It is not easy to process for me. 
>> CORRECT
But I think the difference between living with awareness and not being aware is huge. 
>> But I think the difference between living with awareness and living with unawareness is huge. 
If we are honest at the right time with this awareness, we can have a good impact on people and the environment. 
>> CORRECT
Another thing is that just because I want to be honest doesn\'t make me honest. 
>> CORRECT
To be honest, you must first find a reason for courage and honesty. 
>> CORRECT
I want to have the wise honesty that God gives me.
>> CORRECT
OR I want to have the wise honesty that God bestows upon me.
Thank you so much for praying for me.
>> CORRECT
I\'m getting better now! 
>> CORRECT
See you soon!
>> CORRECT

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