Do you think people should have cosmetic surgery to enhance their looks?
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These days,many people are interested in cosmetic surgery,
it seems to be popular especially in Korea.
I think,people tend to be more important to their appearance .
So,it might be good or bad, it\'s also a personal choice.
It depend on satisfaction with beauty on themselves.
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These days,many people are interested in cosmetic surgery,
>> These days, many people are interested in cosmetic surgery.
it seems to be popular especially in Korea.
it seems to be popular especially in Korea.
>> It seems to be popular all over the world, especially in Korea.
I think,people tend to be more important to their appearance .
I think,people tend to be more important to their appearance .
>> I think people put more importance on their appearance.
So,it might be good or bad,
So,it might be good or bad,
>> So, it might be good or bad.
it\'s also a personal choice.
it\'s also a personal choice.
>> It\'s just a matter of personal choice.
It depend on satisfaction with beauty on themselves.
It depend on satisfaction with beauty on themselves.
>> It depends on how satisfied people are with how they look.
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