Do you think people should stick to one career or change careers throughout their life? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
There are various careers.
All careers are important and then should have been respected.
However,their values seem to change around social environment .
So,People will experience many difference careers
throughout their life in the future.
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There are various careers.
>> Correct
All careers are important and then should have been respected.
All careers are important and then should have been respected.
>> All careers are important and should be respected.
However,their values seem to change around social environment .
However,their values seem to change around social environment .
>> However, their value seems to change depending on the social environment.
So,People will experience many difference careers throughout their life in the future.
So,People will experience many difference careers throughout their life in the future.
>> So, people will experience many different careers throughout their lives in the future.
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