Do you think people spend their weekends wisely?
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think people spend their weekends wisely? Why or why not?
Yes. I think so.
Everyone has each ways to relax themselves on weekends.
In my friend, he likes to go camping.
So he used to go camping almost weekends if it’s good wheather.
I think it looks like some work to pack and unpack the luggages for going camping.But he feels freedom and relif at the time.
(Even if I go camping, I feel to be tired going it every weeks.)
In my case, I like walking along the beach without holding anything in my hands.
Therefore, we have each way to fit each other to relax and spend happy weekend.
강사 첨삭
Yes. I think so.
Everyone has each ways to relax themselves on weekends.
>> Everyone has their own way of relaxing on weekends.
>> Yes, I think so.
Everyone has each ways to relax themselves on weekends.
>> Everyone has their own way of relaxing on weekends.
In my friend, he likes to go camping.
>> One of my friends likes to go camping.
>> One of my friends likes to go camping.
So he used to go camping almost weekends if it’s good wheather.
>> He usually goes camping almost every weekend if the weather is good.
>> He usually goes camping almost every weekend if the weather is good.
I think it looks like some work to pack and unpack the luggages for going camping. But he feels freedom and relif at the time.
>> I think it looks like a lot of work to pack and unpack luggage for camping, but he feels freedom and relief at that time.
(Even if I go camping, I feel to be tired going it every weeks.)
>> Even if I go camping, I would feel tired if I did it every week.
In my case, I like walking along the beach without holding anything in my hands.
>> In my case, I like walking along the beach without holding anything in my hands.
>> In my case, I like walking along the beach without holding anything in my hands.
Therefore, we have each way to fit each other to relax and spend happy weekend.
>> Therefore, everyone has their own way of relaxing and spending a happy weekend.
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