Do you think people today are busier than in the past? Why or why not?
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Most people are busier than the past people.
Because development of telecommunication and transportation, modern people use the subdivided time.
For example, modern people could have many appointments, such as nine a.m, one p.m and five p.m.
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Most people are busier than the past people.
>> Most people today are busier than people in the past.
Because development of telecommunication and transportation, modern people use the subdivided time.
Because development of telecommunication and transportation, modern people use the subdivided time.
>> Because of the development of telecommunication and transportation, modern people use their time in a more efficient way.
For example, modern people could have many appointments, such as nine a.m, one p.m and five p.m.
For example, modern people could have many appointments, such as nine a.m, one p.m and five p.m.
>> For example, modern people could have many appointments, such as at 9 a.m., 1 p.m., and 5 p.m.
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