Do you think people today are more or less willing to help others than in the past? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
People living today are more colder and are individualism than in the past.
In Korea, There are too many pseudo-religion.
They pretend to ask a direction, but it is missionary work.
So, these days many people hate what someone ask me something on the road.
강사 첨삭
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People living today are more colder and are individualism than in the past.
>> People living today are colder and more individualistic than in the past.
In Korea, There are too many pseudo-religion.
>> In Korea, there are too many pseudo-religions.
>> Korea has too many pseudo-religions.
They pretend to ask a direction, but it is missionary work.
>> They pretend to ask for directions, but it is actually missionary work.
So, these days many people hate what someone ask me something on the road.
>> So, these days, many people dislike it when someone approaches them on the road.
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