Do you think people today fear aging more than in the past? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think people fear getting older regardless of the era.
Every creatures are getting older and can\'t avoid that.
So, I think it\'s important to accept the fact and prepare for a healthy life in the future.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]! Your answer is clear and philosophical, which makes it thoughtful. I like how you focused on acceptance and preparation rather than fear. To improve, pay attention to singular and plural forms (every creature, not every creatures). Overall, simple, clear, and meaningful response, nice work!
-Teacher Wela
Every creatures are getting older and can\'t avoid that.
>> Every creature gets older and cannot avoid it.
So, I think it\'s important to accept the fact and prepare for a healthy life in the future.
>> So, I think it is important to accept this fact and prepare for a healthy life in the future.
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