Do you think people who exercise are happier than those who don’t? Why?
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I think people who exercise are happier than people who don\'t. Because people who exercise are much stronger than others. And people who don\'t exercise are much weaker than others. I think that health makes happiness. So I think that people who exercise are happier than those who don’t.
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I think people who exercise are happier than people who don\'t. Because people who exercise are much stronger than others. And people who don\'t exercise are much weaker than others.
>> I think people who exercise are happier than people who don\'t because they are much stronger than others whereas those who don\'t exercise are much weaker.
I think that health makes happiness.
>> or: I believe that health makes happiness.
So I think that people who exercise are happier than those who don’t.
>> correct
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