Do you think people who have cosmetic surgery are always happy with the results?

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I have thought to have a surgery before but I changed my mind because of the adverse effects that might occur after

getting it. Thanks for doing your homework especially when sharing your opinions about this matter. ^^

~~Teacher May~~

Being beautiful is one of the most important desire for humans.

>> Being beautiful is one of the most important desire OF humans.

Recently, many people consider to have a cosmetic surgery without being embarrassed.

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OR >> Recently, many people consider to have a cosmetic surgery with confidence.

It was easy to notice if somebody had a plastic surgery and it would be an issue which people can make a gossip about changes of people\'s appearance.

>> It was easy to notice if somebody had a plastic surgery. For people, it is already an issue and they criticize people\'s appearance.

However, people have been changed their mind not to care about other\'s eyes.

>> However, people have changed their mind not to care about what others see.

I think that cosmetic surgery is really useful way for person who don\'t want to meet friends or people because of his/her appearance. 

>> I think that cosmetic surgery is really a useful way for persons who don\'t want to meet friends or other people because of his/her appearance.
They could have self-confidence after getting plastic surgery.

>> They can have more self-confidence after undergoing a plastic surgery.

It makes people to show up them to the world.

>> It makes people to show up themselves to the world.

However, there is an adverse effect if side effect occur after surgery.

That cause serious problem to people and they would not come out.

>> However, there is an adverse effect after surgery that cause serious problems.

So, I don\'t think cosmetic surgery are always good for people.

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r >> So, I don\'t think it\'s really advisable to have a cosmetic surgery.