Do you think people will ever stop using bicycles?

2025-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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I think people will use bicycles in the futher future, same as now. If we are worring about the earth polutions, then we must use hybrid transfortations. But, It will become only for their exercise or fun, not a type of transfortations. Because people have to work out for their health and It will appear to be new for a kind of useful transfortations.

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I think people will use bicycles in the futher future, same as now.
>> I think people will use bicycle in the further future, the same as now. 
OR >> I believe people will continue to use bicycles in the future, just as they do today.

If we are worring about the earth polutions, then we must use hybrid transfortations.
>> If we are worried about the air pollution on earth, then we must use hybrid transportation. 
OR >> If we are concerned about global air pollution, we must switch to hybrid vehicles.

But, It will become only for their exercise or fun, not a type of transfortations.
>> However, it will only be use for leisure/recreational purposes or exercise and not as a means of transportation. 

Because people have to work out for their health and It will appear to be new for a kind of useful transfortations.
>> Since people have to work out for their health, it will appear as a new kind of useful mode of transportation.
OR >> Since individuals must exercise for their health, it will seem like an innovative form of practical transportation.

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