Do you think people will stop cooking at home because of technology? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think if the technology is developed a lot at the future and robots can cook like people, than we can stop to cook ourselves. However, I think it take a lot of time. If the recipe is simple and repeated, then it is easy to realize with robot. For example, we already can see robots which make coffee automatically. However, cooking various kind of food is hard. We have to wash vagetables and meat , to cut into various shape, and to boil or to fry them. The most important thing is robot can\'t taste food, so we can\'t ensure the dish is delicious.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Mary! You gave a very logical and realistic explanation about how technology may affect home cooking. I especially like your point about robots not being able to taste food, that is a strong and thoughtful argument. Your use of examples, like coffee-making robots, makes your answer more convincing. To improve, focus on verb tense (will take), plural forms (kinds, shapes), and spelling (vegetables). Overall, your reasoning is clear, practical, and well-supported, great job!
-Teacher Wela
I think if the technology is developed a lot at the future and robots can cook like people, than we can stop to cook ourselves.
>> I think if technology develops significantly in the future and robots can cook like humans, then we may stop cooking ourselves.
However, I think it take a lot of time.
>> However, I think it will take a long time.
If the recipe is simple and repeated, then it is easy to realize with robot.
>> If the recipe is simple and repetitive, it is easier to implement with robots.
For example, we already can see robots which make coffee automatically.
>> For example, we can already see robots that make coffee automatically.
However, cooking various kind of food is hard.
>>However, cooking various kinds of food is difficult.
We have to wash vagetables and meat , to cut into various shape, and to boil or to fry them.
>> We have to wash vegetables and meat, cut them into various shapes, and boil or fry them.
The most important thing is robot can\'t taste food, so we can\'t ensure the dish is delicious.
>> The most important thing is that robots cannot taste food, so we cannot ensure that the dish is delicious.
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