Do you think people will use public transport more in the future? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think people will use more public transport in the future. Because government commonly improve their city\'s public transport, in the future, public transport will be more convenient. The route, interval and sort of public transport will various. Then, people will feel using the public transport is convenient than using private car.
However, there is an exception. In Korea, the bus route is disappeared because the user is decreased and operating cost is not practical. It causes the reason why we need to use private car.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for your answer, Mary! Your ideas were very clear, especially your point about how improving routes and convenience can increase public transport use in the future. You also provided a good real example about Korea, which made your explanation stronger. I encourage you to keep working on sentence flow and grammar so your thoughts come across even more naturally. Overall, great effort, your writing is becoming more organized and thoughtful each time!
-Teacher Wela
Because government commonly improve their city\'s public transport, in the future, public transport will be more convenient.
>> People will likely use public transport more because governments continuously improve their cities’ public transportation systems.
The route, interval and sort of public transport will various.
>> The routes, intervals, and types of public transport will become more diverse.
Then, people will feel using the public transport is convenient than using private car.
>> Then, people will find public transport more convenient than using private cars.
In Korea, the bus route is disappeared because the user is decreased and operating cost is not practical.
>> Then, people will find public transport more convenient than using private cars.
In Korea, the bus route is disappeared because the user is decreased and operating cost is not practical.
>> In Korea, some bus routes have disappeared because the number of users has decreased and operating costs are not practical.
It causes the reason why we need to use private car.
>> This forces people to use private cars.
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