Do you think people will use public transport more in the future?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes.
Public transport has been improved a lot. And it will be improved as well.
People will get more comfortable taking public transport.
강사 첨삭
Your answer is clear and straightforward. You expressed your opinion confidently and logically. To improve, try combining short sentences for smoother flow and use more natural expressions like become more comfortable. Keep it up!
-Teacher Wela
Public transport has been improved a lot. And it will be improved as well.
>> Public transportation has improved a lot, and it will continue to improve in the future.
People will get more comfortable taking public transport.
>> People will become more comfortable using public transportation.
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