Do you think people with food allergies feel deprived? Why/ Why not?
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Good day Sir [이름]!
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It\'s nice to hear that you are not allergic to any particular food.
I think that we should eat even a small amount of food that we are allergic to in order for our body to get used to it.
I feel sorry for the kids that you mentioned below, they should really seek a doctor\'s help because of it. Anyway, talk to you soon.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask it in class.
Teacher Nina
I am very lucky that I am not allergic to any foods.
>> I am very lucky that I am not allergic to any kind of food.
There might be some foods that I am allergic to, although I am not aware of.
>> Correct!
The people who have a server allergy to particular foods may feel more than they are just deprived of.
>> The people who have severe allergy to a particular food may feel more than they are just deprived of it.
I have seen TV programs in which many kids severely suffered from the food allergies.
>> I have seen TV programs in which many kids severely suffered from food allergies.
In an extreme case, there was a child who could not even sleep or eat due to intense itching all over his body.
>> Correct!
He could not help continuously scratching his body.
>> Correct!
Itching was so intense and intolerable that he even felt that he would like to pick out his skin with a knife. \\
>> Correct!
Some adults said that they even would like to cut off the itching part of their bodies.
>> Correct!
The skin of his whole body became hard as wood because of the repeated cycle of continuous scratching, more itching, bleeding, scabbing, and scratching again.
>> His skin became hard as wood because of the repeated cycle of continuous scratching, more itchiness, bleeding, scabbing that leads to scratching again.
>> OR: The skin of his whole body became hard as wood because of the repeated cycle of continuous scratching, itchiness, bleeding, scabbing and scratching again.
Some food allergies can cause severe reactions, and may even be life-threatening.
>> Correct!
Early recognition and management of allergic reactions to food are important.
>> Correct!
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