Do you think phone apps also helps in preventing the Coronavirus?
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It can help to prevent spread of coronavirus.
In Korea, we are using many apps about coronavirus.
For example, ‘corona app’ inform to people moving of infected people. Through this app, people can know dangerous place. Also, if someone visit the place which visit infected people, he or she can check their condition of infection quickly and can protect to spread more.
Also, the government of Korea manage people who enter the country after spreading coronavirus through a app. People who come overseas like Europe and China should check their condition like fever everyday through app during self-isolation. If someone don’t check their condition or go out ignoring self-isolation, the government can’t know that and also handle properly.
So, I think it is very effective device in this situation.
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>>It can help to prevent the spread of coronavirus.
In Korea, we are using many apps about coronavirus.
>>CORRECT!
For example, ‘corona app’ inform to people moving of infected people.
>>For example, ‘corona app’ inform people when the infected people are moving .
Through this app, people can know dangerous place.
>>Through this app, people can know the dangerous place.
Also, if someone visit the place which visit infected people, he or she can check their condition of infection quickly and can protect to spread more.
>>Also, if someone visits the place which is visited by the infected people, he or she can check their condition quickly and can be protected from spreading more.
Also, the government of Korea manage people who enter the country after spreading coronavirus through a app.
>>CORRECT!
People who come overseas like Europe and China should check their condition like fever everyday through app during self-isolation.
>>People who come overseas like Europe and China should check their condition like their temperature every day during self-isolation.
If someone don’t check their condition or go out ignoring self-isolation, the government can’t know that and also handle properly.
>>CORRECT!
So, I think it is very effective device in this situation.
>>CORRECT!
So, I think it is very effective device in this situation.
>>CORRECT!
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