Do you think playing Lego is educational?
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I think playing Lego is absolutely educational. That is because playing Lego makes me keep thinking about how to make it better with the imagination so I can develop my ability to think and can be very creative. Also I can get better at patience from building Lego for hours. Besides, works that use your hands like Lego make your small muscle develop and that make you have great brain. I think there is nothing like playing Lego to develop my creativity, imagination and patience for education.
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I think playing Lego is absolutely educational. That is because playing
Lego makes me keep thinking about how to make it better with the
imagination so I can develop my ability to think and can be very
creative. Also I can get better at patience from building Lego for
hours. Besides, works that use your hands like Lego make your small
muscle develop and that make you have great brain. I think there is
nothing like playing Lego to develop my creativity, imagination and
patience for education.
>> I think playing Lego is absolutely educational. That is because playing
Lego makes me keep thinking about how to make it better with the
imagination so I can develop my ability to think and can be very
creative. Also I can improve my patience from building Lego for
hours. Besides, working that is using your hands like making Lego develops your small muscles and makes you have great brain. I think there is
no other toy that is educational like playing Lego to develop my creativity, imagination and
patience for education.
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