Do you think political campaigns are purely lies? Why or why not?
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I don\'t think all political campaigns are lies. People and I don\'t believe all campaigns that politicians promise. However, most politicians have researched their own policies with many professionals in various fields by discussing issues. They also ask unspecified public to give feedback about their policies. We have seen a lot of politicians commit corruption. That\'s why people don\'t want to vote for when there is an election. People have to know that elections are the most important way for people to practice democracy and we don\'t have to find the best politician, we just need to find the worst people and then vote for the second best. If so, our society will change slowly.
As I mentioned, I don\' believe fully what politicians promise for their citizens. However, I also believe that many politicians try to keep their promise during their term.
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Do you think political campaigns are purely lies? Why or why not?
I don\'t think all political campaigns are lies.
>>> CORRECT
People and I don\'t believe all campaigns that politicians promise.
>>> CORRECT
However, most politicians have researched their own policies with many professionals in various fields by discussing issues.
>>> However, most politicians have researched their own policies with the help of professionals in various fields by discussing these issues.
They also ask unspecified public to give feedback about their policies.
>>> They also ask unspecified public opinions or surveys to give feedback about these politicians and their policies.
We have seen a lot of politicians commit corruption.
>>> CORRECT
That\'s why people don\'t want to vote for when there is an election.
>>> That\'s the reason why a lot of people don\'t want to vote for them on the election.
People have to know that elections are the most important way for people to practice democracy and we don\'t have to find the best politician, we just need to find the worst people and then vote for the second best.
>>> People has to know that elections are the most important way for us to practice our democracy and we don\'t have to find the best politician; we just need to find the worst people and never vote for them. Then vote for the second best.
If so, our society will change slowly.
>>> CORRECT
As I mentioned, I don\' believe fully what politicians promise for their citizens.
>>> As I mentioned, I don\'t fully believe on what politicians promise to do for the citizens.
However, I also believe that many politicians try to keep their promise during their term.
>>> CORRECT
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