Do you think political orientation is important? Why or why not? Make a short essay
학생이 쓴 원문
I think political orientation isn’t important .
Because it is just type of political opinion.
But, in Korean somebody think it is important to have right opinions.
I think, It makes them have preconceptions.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Su A! Thank you for doing your homework!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
>>CORRECT
Because it is just type of political opinion.
>>Because it is just a type of political opinion.
But, in Korean somebody think it is important to have right opinions.
>>But in Korea, people think it is important to have right opinions.
I think, it makes them have preconceptions.
>>CORRECT
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