Do you think professional grooming for pets is necessary?
학생이 쓴 원문
When pets are being groomed at home, they are nervous or aggressive.
They can be stressful, so a professional can handle them safely.
강사 첨삭
You explained the importance of professional grooming clearly and concisely. I like that you focused on the pet’s safety and stress, which shows thoughtful reasoning. To improve, pay attention to small grammar details like “become nervous” and “stressful for them” for natural phrasing. Overall, your answer is clear, practical, and easy to understand!
-Teacher Wela
When pets are being groomed at home, they are nervous or aggressive
>> When pets are groomed at home, they can become nervous or aggressive.
They can be stressful, so a professional can handle them safely.
>> This can be stressful for them, so a professional can handle pets safely.
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