Do you think public transport in your city is efficient enough? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, I think so. The bus and subway arrive on time and the transfers are convenient. It takes me anywhere I want to go.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Susan!
I would agree with you on this based on several articles and comments from my students saying that the Seoul area has very accessible and convenient public transport.
- T. Caitlyn
Yes, I think so.
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The bus and subway arrive on time and the transfers are convenient.
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It takes me anywhere I want to go.
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