Do you think public transportation is better than driving your own car?
학생이 쓴 원문
Yes, the public transfortation is better than car at least in Seoul.
There are so many people in Seoul.
In morning, they alwasy suffer from traffic so the subway is best way.
The subway is fast, accurate and regularly. I have never been late for work because the subway also never delayed.
When I drive in Seoul, they have less parking lot, and fare is high too.
It maight be spend more money than public transfortation.
However, If I have my car, it must be convenient.
I don\'t have to be in a crowd, I can feel free than bus or subway.
If I didn\'t live in Seoul, I want to try drive myself.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for sharing your opinion, [이름]! ^_^ I agree, public transportations can be a lot more convenient than driving a car in certain situations. When we drive our cars in a big city like Seoul, we might get caught up by traffic! D: But in terms of dealing with a crowd of passengers, it can be more comfortable to just drive a car. :)
~T. Harmony <3
>> Yes. In my opinion, I find riding public transportation to be better than driving my own car in Seoul.
There are so many people in Seoul.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
In morning, they alwasy suffer from traffic so the subway is best way.
>> Every morning, people would always experience heavy traffic, which makes riding subways to be the best option.
>> Every morning, people would always experience heavy traffic, which makes riding subways to be the best option.
The subway is fast, accurate and regularly.
>> The subway is quite fast, accurate, and arrives at a regular pace.
I have never been late for work because the subway also never delayed.
>> I have never been late for work because the subway is never delayed.
>> I have never been late for work because the subway is never delayed.
When I drive in Seoul, they have less parking lot, and fare is high too.
>> When I drive my car in Seoul, I have less access to parking lots and the fare prices are too high.
>> When I drive my car in Seoul, I have less access to parking lots and the fare prices are too high.
It maight be spend more money than public transfortation.
>> I might spend more money when driving than riding a public transportation.
>> I might spend more money when driving than riding a public transportation.
However, If I have my car, it must be convenient.
>> However, if I am driving my car, it becomes convenient.
>> However, if I am driving my car, it becomes convenient.
I don\'t have to be in a crowd, I can feel free than bus or subway.
>> I won\'t be struggling to get through a crowd, and I have more freedom compared to when I\'m on a bus or a subway.
>> I won\'t be struggling to get through a crowd, and I have more freedom compared to when I\'m on a bus or a subway.
If I didn\'t live in Seoul, I want to try drive myself.
>> If I didn\'t live in Seoul, I would like to try driving by myself.
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